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[Vore] First Story (F/M, Digestion, Naga)
It was a warm summer night in the swamp, yet more than a few predators were still lurking, waiting, searching for prey.
The swamp was filled with noises of creatures, scurrying along the trees, or stomping around for prey, these sounds filled the air.
A young Tysarian Naga lay sleeping on a branch, her navy blue tail curled around it, she looked more innocent than most of the predators that lurked the swamp, but just as voracious if not more.
Alytha awakened to hear her stomach growling “Already, I just ate an hour ago and I’m hungry again?!? Gost that little neko didn’t make much of a meal I guess.” She sighed.
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Literature
Comfort Within Coils (POV vore)
The wind blew rapidly as you huddled your arms together and trekked through the shadowy woods. This was not how this day was suppose to go, all you wanted to do was take a nice walk through the forest to get some relaxation and admire the nature. If you knew that you would end up getting lost and be stuck in this wooded maze all the way to nighttime, you wouldn't have come at all. It was getting cold and you were starting to get tired, but you knew you couldn't just go to sleep without any shelter. You soon came to a stop in front of a large tree where you decided to give your feet a short break from all the walking, they were killing you. As you layed against the tree, to began to hear soft slithering and hissing, but to thought that it might have just been your imagination, being in the wood alone for a long period of time can lead to you imagine sounds that aren't there after all. However, that was all proven wrong with what you heard next. "Well well, what do we have here~? A
Literature
Dragoness (Soft vore)
(Warning, this contains vore, read at your own risk)
I walk in the peaceful forest in the most beautiful mountain range ever. I decided that today was going to be a great day, mostly because I can walk around the woods without ever being bothered. My stress has taken a toll on me and now I needed to do myself a favor and help myself to remove my stress. Anyway, I walk deeper into the woods and I realize how thirsty I was. I look around for a creek and I notice one almost immediately.
I walk towards the creek until I hear a soft sound coming from the direction from behind me.
I look around and I see nothing. I shrug it off and I fill up my
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Just a excerpt from the story I'm writing.
May I please have some constructive criticism on how to make my writing better?
May I please have some constructive criticism on how to make my writing better?
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This.
Is.
ADORABLE.
And since the other two below me have said just about the same thing I was going to, I'll just keep my trap shut as to not annoy you. Though, one thing I know rarely gets annoying is praise, and I must say that this short story has definitely earned it. It is a fine piece of work, and a great milestone on your adventure into the realm of writing and artwork.